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Why don't you believe me?
When I say I love you so?


Because I can't believe that,
When you don't act like it anymore.


Please just hear me out;
I still care for you.


Baby I really doubt;
I just don't think you do.

Do you even know what love means?
Oh, so now you're staying quiet.

Love is trust and devotion.
It's giving the one you love your heart;
The control of your emotions.

I'm sorry, but I don't want your touch.
Love is hard enough to give,
And I've given you enough.


Up against the wall he pushed me,
Look me in the eyes,
He continued to hold me steady.
Tell me no more lies

I looked into his eye's core,
holding his hand,
I don't love you anymore,
And he finally let me stand.
Meant to be a story; I tried to re-write it into poetic form.

Hope you guys like it, and I'm sorry if it's hard to understand.
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whatuwant2B Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008
I love this, it completes my emotions for the moment =)
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008   Photographer
Thank you;
<3
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devilsdaughter113 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
ur one of the few poets on here who can accutally make e feel something wen i read
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008   Photographer
Well I'm glad I can be one of them. Thank you for all of your nice comments :]
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devilsdaughter113 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
=]
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anime-kim Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2007   Traditional Artist
i like this :p
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2007   Photographer
Lol me too [:
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anime-kim Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2007   Traditional Artist
yea^^
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joemamasdaddy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007
hey do u write these like spontaneously or do they come out like after days of writing or what? sorry for asking. i hope u don't mind!
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007   Photographer
Lol I kinda write them spontaneously. Like, I can work off of anything in my stories. As many of my friends say, I'm one of those people that can just pull a character and a complete personality out of my ass, and sadly it works.
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joemamasdaddy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007
wow. right out of there? does it hurt? haha im just screwin around. oy.
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007   Photographer
Lol I don't phrase it like that, but I do think it's true. I make all my characters spontaneously. so it's like, yeah.
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joemamasdaddy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007
i can't do that. if you notice, it took me a couple months to get that jungle chicken up. hahaha. it didn't take forever to get the names down!!!
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007   Photographer
Haha yeah, but at least it was funny. Making love instantly. That's cool. :D
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joemamasdaddy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007
well how else do you .... nevermind.
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007   Photographer
not-instantly? lol
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Saki-the-Sinner Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007
...Now that's poetry.

The interaction between people in that state of relationship always intrigues me.
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
:D Thank you so much.
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cazzu-chan Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007
gya ! it so ...........so ....nya~~~~~~~~TT_TT i luv it !
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:iconkatokumi:
KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
:D Thank you.
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cazzu-chan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2007
nya ~ ^_^
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Torashina Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007
True True.
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NinjaNakashima Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007  Student Writer
It is really good like all your work. I enjoy your stuff a lot. Normally deviations from people I watch I put off looking at them for awhile. Yours are looked at as soon as I am alerted.
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
:D That's the nicest comment I've gotten in foreverr, haha. Thank you for your support; I owe you something. Would you like something made/written? Anything that you think is within my power, lol.
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NinjaNakashima Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007  Student Writer
You are welcome. I would never know what to ask you to do. As long as you keep putting stuff up I am happy. >^.~<
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
<3, okay, I'll get on that. Lol.
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jack-o-lantern-queen Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Writer
that was beautiful I love it :+fav:
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
[[: Thank you.
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jack-o-lantern-queen Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2007   Writer
mm hmm any day
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Pumkin-Lover Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Writer
I love It
Very Nice
Keep Up The Awesome Work man!
Mine Is Way Different Then Yours
Well Two Different People Right..?
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
:D Thank you.

Well, to each his own. My writing style's really really different than a lot of people's. So it's cool. [:
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Pumkin-Lover Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2007   Writer
:) That is Cool Isnt It?
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