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Why don't you believe me?
When I say I love you so?


Because I can't believe that,
When you don't act like it anymore.


Please just hear me out;
I still care for you.


Baby I really doubt;
I just don't think you do.

Do you even know what love means?
Oh, so now you're staying quiet.

Love is trust and devotion.
It's giving the one you love your heart;
The control of your emotions.

I'm sorry, but I don't want your touch.
Love is hard enough to give,
And I've given you enough.


Up against the wall he pushed me,
Look me in the eyes,
He continued to hold me steady.
Tell me no more lies

I looked into his eye's core,
holding his hand,
I don't love you anymore,
And he finally let me stand.
Meant to be a story; I tried to re-write it into poetic form.

Hope you guys like it, and I'm sorry if it's hard to understand.
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whatuwant2B Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008
I love this, it completes my emotions for the moment =)
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008   Photographer
Thank you;
<3
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devilsdaughter113 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
ur one of the few poets on here who can accutally make e feel something wen i read
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008   Photographer
Well I'm glad I can be one of them. Thank you for all of your nice comments :]
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devilsdaughter113 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
=]
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anime-kim Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2007   Traditional Artist
i like this :p
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2007   Photographer
Lol me too [:
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anime-kim Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2007   Traditional Artist
yea^^
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joemamasdaddy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007
hey do u write these like spontaneously or do they come out like after days of writing or what? sorry for asking. i hope u don't mind!
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KatoKumi Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007   Photographer
Lol I kinda write them spontaneously. Like, I can work off of anything in my stories. As many of my friends say, I'm one of those people that can just pull a character and a complete personality out of my ass, and sadly it works.
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